Looking back to this week’s post on character change and how this affects and reflects on the supporting cast, let’s zero in on the process of character evolution.
In real life, it’s helpful to discuss what’s on your mind, especially if you are considering an important change in life or attitude. However, in fiction, our characters have to learn this lesson the hard way. Keeping secrets or failing to confide in someone at the right time (Hello, Dumbledore…) creates opportunities for misinterpretation, conflict, and interpersonal friction.
Considering a recent work or work in progress, look at how your character evolved from the beginning to the end of your story. Then ask: Did you character confide in anyone about their change? Did they seek advice? Were they afraid of being judged? Did their lack of communication create problems with other characters?
A protagonist who undergoes a religious experience may keep this from friends who know him only as an atheist. A hero planning to slay a dragon may leave her companions behind, hoping to keep them safe. Someone planning to leave for college or change careers may not inform their family or peers, for fear they might react poorly.
If your hero is unwilling or unable to share what’s on their mind, they also risk going down a wrong track. They won’t avail themselves of different perspectives or advice that might influence their path.
Take a look at your character change arc and see if these kinds of missed opportunities for communication can create new obstacles and conflicts for your protagonist.

